Wednesday, April 29, 2009

Showing not Telling

As we continue with Term 2 we have been learning more about personification, here is William Adlam's (Head Boy) personification.

The tarmac shivers with fear
Nerves begin to boil like a jug
The petrol fumes lure me to my seat
The engine roared like a tornado

The tires heat up like a oven
The lights go out like a flash of lightning
The crowd roars like a tiger

Can you guess what he is showing not telling?

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